03-21-2018, 08:02 PM
Rubric:
Ricochet: 81
Ruwin: 74
Ricochet Penalties: 81 - 0 = 81
No deductions made.
Ruwin Penalties: 74 - 0 = 74
No deductions made. However, in the last paragraph of Ruwin's attack three it reads "He would press at him, using his front hooves to strike at his chest and injured shoulder as he continued to press his attack." Try to use 'He aimed to' in the future to get a more clear direction that he's attempting to attack :)
WINNER IS RICOCHET
Please let us know your feedback on the system and the fight either here or Discord as it's still a huge work in progress!
Ricochet: 81
Ruwin: 74
Ricochet Penalties: 81 - 0 = 81
No deductions made.
Ruwin Penalties: 74 - 0 = 74
No deductions made. However, in the last paragraph of Ruwin's attack three it reads "He would press at him, using his front hooves to strike at his chest and injured shoulder as he continued to press his attack." Try to use 'He aimed to' in the future to get a more clear direction that he's attempting to attack :)
WINNER IS RICOCHET
Please let us know your feedback on the system and the fight either here or Discord as it's still a huge work in progress!
REMEMBER THAT YOU ARE A WOLF, AND YOU CANNOT BE CAGED.